Faculty Critique

Well finally a critique that I didn't walk out of discouraged. Last night went quite well. Nick and Mark had some great suggestions and I’m going to take a lot of their advice. Some of which was to keep the background to maybe one color, like greens. This way the focus is on the characters. They want to make sure I have Flexman really rounded/hunched and slow, while Flash sits erect and is not only fast, but also anxious. Like his tails always wagging. Then once the powers switch to have Flexman taping his foot before he gets up. They suggested doing away with slow motion scene and dealing with more of their personality. Like a close-up shot of flash getting impatient. They feel I have a lot of animation and might not get it all done. They suggested to try and simplify it. They suggestion I block all the animation out first, And then work on refining the money shots. If time allows work down they line. They said you could always fix it afterwards.


3-D Animatic (6.1MB) - Just setting up the shots